Ben brought Uncle Amos home to supper that night, just like he always did on Thursdays. Lucille did herself proud with fried chicken. Jenny made mashed potatoes, English Pea Salad, and sliced fresh garden tomatoes.
“Ladies, I haven’t had a meal this good since I don’t know when. Lucille, I been thinking about asking you to marry me, and your fried chicken just made up my mind.” He said.
“Well, I hope it don’t break yore heart, but I already been married plenty. I like to do things my way. I don’t want to have to take care of nobody no more. I don’t mind cooking you up some fried chicken once in a while, though.” She laughed.
“Well, that’s a relief. I really ain’t partial to gittin’ married again either, but I sure admire your fried chicken.” Everybody got a laugh out of that.
Jenny brought out coffee and pie, then told Ben. “Mama and I want to talk to you about something. Mama wants to buy Miss Dolly’s shop. Miss Dolly needs three thousand dollars. Mama has fifteen hundred. I am thinking I’d like to go in with her. You know I’ve got a little saved from before we got married. Lucy could go to work with me. There’s a little bed/sitting room opening right onto the shop where she could nap and play. That way, I could work and not have to leave her. What do you think?”
Lucille spoke before Ben had time to respond. “Now before you worry over this too much, Ben, I want you to know. I ain’t expecting to live with you. I can move into the back of the shop. I want my own place. I don’t want to be dependin’ on nobody for a place to live. It was good of Shirley and Martin to let me fix up their garage apartment, but I don’t want to feel like I am in their way. I wouldn’t be a bit surprised if Martin’s mama didn’t want to move in there. The house was hers to start with. I sure don’t want to cause no family trouble. I don’t mean for Jenny to go in with me if you’d rather not. Dolly has already suggested I could pay it out by the month if I haf’ to. She ain’t had no other offers.”
“Let’s just do the figures and see how it works out. Jenny has her own money to use as she pleases. You know I’m not the kind of fellow to take from my wife. I like the idea of her having Lucy with her. Jerry wants more hours, anyway. Uncle Amos is there in the mornings. All that kind of fits in with something I was thinking about, anyway. Jenny’s idea of coffee and treats has really caught on. You know the hardware store and Dolly’s Shop have an adjoining wall. How would you feel about opening up between and I could give my customers a coupon and they could come over there for a free coffee? They could buy their own snack. That would help us both.” Ben looked thoughtful. “It might just work. What do you think, Uncle Amos? You are a good businessman. Do you think it’s a good idea?”
“It sure sounds good to me. I believe folks would always go for free coffee. I expect they’d turn a good profit. I believe me and you could open up the space between the two stores and not have to hire nobody to do that work. I did all the work around my store. I never wanted to pay for no work I could do myself.” Amos looked enthusiastic at the thought of getting his hands dirty.
“I can’t see any reason not to do this. I believe we’d all come out well.” Ben admitted. “Let’s get cracking.”
“If you don’t mind me makin’ a long distance call, I guess I’d better call Shirley an’ let her know she’s gonna need a baby sitter. I have an idea it will be a relief to her,” Lucille said. “I’ll get the operator to call back and let me know what the charge is so I can pay you back. I don’t usually call long distance, but I want to talk to Dolly before somebody else gits the place.”
“You go right ahead, but you are not paying us back for that call.” Ben told her.
Lucille was gone about ten minutes. “Well, Shirley took it real good. She told me she’s about four months along and she ain’t goin’ back to teachin’ this fall. She’s really looking forward to finally gittin’ to stay home with a baby. She had to go back when school started in the fall with the other three. She did ask if I could come stay a couple of weeks when the baby comes, though. I told her I figured you could handle things. Turns out, it’s good I come up with somethin’ else anyway. Old Lady Benson has been houndin’ Marty about wantin’ my apartment. She thinks she’s still got a claim to it since they bought the house from her. He told her I’d done put three thousand dollars in it an’ it wasn’t up to him. She told him she’d give me four thousand if I’d give it up. I told Marty to tell her, it’d sure hurt me but I guess I’d do it. If she wants to keep that new stove, icebox, and curtains I put in I told him she could have them for two hundred fifty dollars more. Sounds like a pretty good deal to git them out of a hard spot. I don’t envy Shirley none, havin’ that old lady in her back yard, but she says she can handle it.
Six months later:
Lucille walked in Jenny’s Sweet Shop and surprised Jenny at the register. “Mama, why in the world didn’t you tell us you were coming on the bus today? Seems like you were gone a year instead of just three weeks. Uncle Amos was planning to drive over and pick you Sunday! I can’t fuss, though. I am so glad to see you. I’d dance a jig if I could, but Lucy and this big old baby under my apron are ‘bout to wear me out. I can’t believe I’ve still got five months to go! Uncle Amos has been having to help me half a day every day. Come on in and I’ll get us a cup of coffee. Lucy, come see! Grandma’s back. Tell me all about that new baby.”
“Oh, she’s a pretty little red-headed blue-eyed thing with the curliest eyelashes you ever saw, just like you and Jimmy! I got some real cute pictures of all the kids. Old Lady Benson was claiming credit for them eyelashes the whole time. You know, I always talked about the eyelashes on my babies. Whooee! I’m glad I don’t have to put up with that woman no more! She tried to talk me down to a hundred and fifty dollars for that new stove and icebox I put in. I held out for two-hundred fifty and she gave up and paid it, once she found out I had another seller lined up. Lord, that woman is hard to please.
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Thanks so much, Sally!
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Terrific ending Linda.. in the Blogger later.. hugs x
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Thanks. Don’t you love it when people make opportunities!
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Yes I do.. it is people who sit on their backsides and wait for life to come to them that miss out… xxx
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I think the meaning of luck is taking opportunity.
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And being more than just a little bit brave. xx
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So true!
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Great happy ending where you’ve wrapped everything up, Linda. Good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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I love people take advantage of opportunities instead of giving up! There’s almost always something you can do to help yourself.
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I am hooked on your serials Linda. I loved this one. And looking forward to the next.
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Thanks. I am wondering right now where to go next.
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Take your time….but hurry. 😂😂😂
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Here you g!
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S.w.e.e.t. ending. Everyone ended up happy, well, and prospering. 😀 ❤
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A great story and a very satisfying ending. I’ve really enjoyed it.I’ll probably be back to look up some of those pie recipes!
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They will make you happy!
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I just love happy endings! beautiful story from beginning to end
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Thank you.
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Love that they opened that shop. And that the housing crisis worked out for all. Great ending. Nicely done, Linda.
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Yea, wouldn’t you love to have Mama Benson in your backyard?
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For sure.
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Reblogged this on The Writers Desk and commented:
Don’t miss the finale and if you didn’t read the whole story you can start at part one and read it through. Great story by a wonderful author. And, do but Linda’s book; “Everything Smells Just Like Poke Salad” !!!
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Thanks.
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What a wonderful ending, Linda. I am so pleased that it worked out for all of them in the end! 🙂
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They knew how to seize opportunity. That’s what some people call luck.
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Well, I am happy whatever it was 🙂
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